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As I hear more and more of the
negative criticisms of rap, new ideas are starting to occur to me. One of the
most interesting is that, perhaps, people who don’t like rap music simply don’t
know how to listen to it. This might
be a strange idea to some, to have to learn how to listen to something. Yes,
most of us can hear things – but how do we really listen to something, by which
I mean the music in its proper context, a context that reveals just as much
about the music as the music itself does. I would posit that this idea is not
as farfetched as it might first seem. Yes, when we read a book, there is the
story on the page in front of us that we enjoy. But if we are aware of the
greater narrative of the book, such as themes and symbols, inevitably our
enjoyment of the experience deepens. Such a metaphor can be applied to music.
This
whole phenomenon has struck me in a certain scientific sense. (What follows is
a gross oversimplification, and might even be an outright misrepresentation of
the scientific method – but such is the result when you have a humanities
student trying to explain it.) I think of it in terms of a scientific
experiment, where we need to isolate variables and observe their response. We
have some variables that we want to measure, and we can only do so accurately
if we are able to isolate them. Roughly, what I have suggested in the previous
paragraph is that there is a musical meaning to rap that is able to be divorced
from its textual meaning while still having an internally consistent meaning
(note, however, that the two can never be studied completely in isolation from
each other, as we shall see.) But how could we ever possibly isolate these,
respectively, musical and textual variables? Certainly, there is no rap (here
referring to both the musical and textual – that is, the lyrics – elements of
rap) that has a textual meaning but no music, and there is no rap that has a
musical meaning but makes no textual sense…or is there?
Enter
what I currently consider THE most interesting (not necessarily in a positive
sense) rap song of all time, Eminem’s “Drop The Bomb On ‘Em”, produced by Dr.
Dre, from the album “Relapse”, released in 2009. This was Eminem’s first album
in 5 years, since his 2004 “Encore”, a hiatus due to his writer’s block and an
addiction to prescription sleeping medication. This song is located at an
exceptional instance of an artist who is in the unique stance of knowing that
his place in the pantheon of all-time-rap greats has already been secured, and
he is still in his prime writing years (He was about 36 at the time). He is
making a comeback – people haven’t heard from him in 5 years. How is he
supposed to follow up “Encore”? “The Marshall Mathers LP”? “The Slim Shady LP”?
“The Eminem Show”? The man has won Grammys, popular and critical acclaim,
worked with the greatest producers of all time, and yet he still has to prove
himself because of his hiatus. He hasn’t forgotten how to rap – in stark
contrast to other legends in similar but certainly not the same circumstance,
like Jay-Z or Lil Wayne, he hasn’t fallen off. But he’s just had about 50% of
his lyrical material considered “off-limits” to him: he is now trying to go
clean, so that means no rapping about weed, shrooms, vicodin, oxycodin, all of
that stuff (Just check out his song “Drug Ballad” – but maybe the title lets
you know all you need to know.) So he can still rap – but what the hell is he
supposed to write about? This is the central tension, certainly palpable and
almost tangible, in this song.
The
answer is, figuratively, “nothing.” Eminem manages to rap over 55 bars without
actually saying anything. What’s more is, this goes beyond the normal amount of
nonsense that the listener naturally allows when listening to rap, simply
because, as I believe, it’s predominantly a musical phenomenon, not a textual
(or even poetic, in the general sense) phenomenon. Let’s take a popular example
today:
In Bobby Ray’s “Ray Bans”, he raps
“My whole team getting green, and I ain’t talking about pottery.” Now, not all
pottery is green. I think when he says pottery he really is referring to
plants, most of which are green. Still, the connection is thin. But Eminem goes
beyond this point.
Nothing he says in
this song really has any real connection to anything outside of his world.
Let’s just say you don’t come away from the song pondering in what sense,
exactly, Eminem is “like Chef Boyardee in this bitch.” Or what metaphoric
meaning he is reaching for when he describes himself as “Captain America on
ferris wheels.” And don’t overthink it. Okay, yes, rap is a genre built on
reference and allusion – but these tools lose their power when no one at all
gets them, even if they are references at all (which they aren’t, here.) This
kind of shit is all over the song. What the fuck is “bumbaclot?” When Eminem
tells me that I think I’m Tom Sawyer, does he really think I’m a 19th
century juvenile dilenquent living along the Mississippi? When he tells me I
should “Get some R&R and marinate in some marinara,” what really should I
do? And these are simply the most egregious of the violations of not just
commonsense, but sense.
The
saddest part of this, though, is when Eminem reaches for lifesavers in the form
of themes and ideas he used to rap about all the time. For instance, even if
you haven’t heard Eminem’s music, you know that his relationship with his mom
has been less than perfect. His earlier references to this subject come across
as tortured and agonized when examined, such as his raps “99% of my life I was
lied to / I just found out my mom does more dope than I do” in “My Name Is”, or
‘When I was just a little baby boy, my momma used to tell me these crazy things
/ She used to tell me my daddy was an evil man, She used to tell me he hated
me” on “Kill You”. However, his references to the same subject on this song are
delivered without any gravitas, simply as words to fill the bar: “I’m like Chef
Boyardee in this bitch / Send a bomb to my mom’s lawyer / I’m a problem for ya
boy…” Notice how the reference to his mom is completely isolated in theme or
even sense from what comes before or after.It’s just filler.
Or how about his earlier habit of
rapping directly to kids, to corrupt and influence them? “Hey kids? Do you like
violence? / Do you want to see my stick 9 inch nails through each one of my
eyelids?” (from his pre-2004 song, “My Name Is”) “Who woulda thought? / That
Slim Shady would be something that you woulda bought / That woulda made you get
a gun and shoot at a cop / I just said it – I ain’t know if you’d do it or
not.” (again pre-2004, “Who Knew?”) But examine the same theme or subject
matter in “Drop The Bomb On ‘Em”: “Like yo fada fuckin’ yo mada” (Bar 17.) Again,
the lines are delivered without any wit, cleverness, or subtlety.
Furthermore, at
times he just completely ignores all habits of English language syntax – “Them no up to par” (bar 30), not “they
aren’t up to par” in, “Mi-ster fly-by-the-seat-of-his-pants pantsed out, fall, [NOT FELL] hit the tram-po-line,
bounced, and grabbed a pair of stilts.” (Bar 14 and 15.) Again, this is still
allowing for the normal amount of leeway we give rappers in the crafting of
their raps. Furthermore, he just gets words wrong: “fucking fictitional characters”. “Fictitional”
is not a word; he was clearly going for fictional, but needed the extra
syllable to fit the bar. This cutting of corners is very uncharacteristic of
Em, and shows that he isn’t quite completely on point here.
In sum, this is
the isolation of the musical variable we had discussed before – Eminem isn’t
make any textual, semantic sense.
But can the same
be said of his musical sense?
As
awful as Eminem’s crafting of textual continuity is here, his rap as a strictly
musical phenomenon is that much more awesome. His flow absolutely kills it. The
word “flow” is a general musical term covering all of the musical aspects of a
rapper’s rap. It is comprised mainly of the manipulation of accent. In my view,
there are 3 types of accent in rap: poetic accent, verbal accent, and metric
accent. The way these accents interact goes a long way to describing how a
rapper’s flow behaves musically.
“Poetic accent” is a natural emphasis
that occurs in the listeners ear on word-notes that are acted upon poetically:
for instance, they are rhymed together, or alliterated together. Such an
example can be seen early on in “Drop The Bomb On ‘Em”, in bar 2, when Eminem
says, “I’m HARD as keNARD” –notice how these words stand out naturally in your
ear.The poetic accent is here denoted by the little mathematical greater-than
sign under rhymed words:
Verbal accent is the natural emphasis
that a certain syllable in a word receives. For instance, in the word “verbal”,
the correct English speaker will place the accent on the first syllable. We will see verbal accent in action a little later on in this post.
Rappers use verbal accent to determine where to place words in the metric bar.
Speaking of which…
Metric accent is the natural emphasis
that a bar (also called a measure) of music receives. This is determined by the
music’s time signature, which is that little fraction-looking thing at the
start of a piece of music. It is important tto note, however, that it is NOT a
fraction. The top and bottom numbers separately indicate two different things.
The bottom number determines what note value receives the beat: if it is a “4”,
the quarter note receives the beat, if “2”, the half-note, if “8”, the 8th
note, and more. The top number says how many of the beat are in each bar. So if
it’s “4”, there are 4 beats, if “6”, 6 beats, and so on. About 95% of all rap music
is in 4/4. That means that there are 4 quarter notes per bar. Such is the case
with “Drop The Bomb On ‘Em.” In a bar of 4/4, the natural accents of the bar
are such that beats 1 and 3, are called the “strong” beats, while beats 2 and 4
are the weak beats. This has been notated below:
So,
to the title of this article: how are you supposed to listen to rap?
Interesting, by completely ignoring the rap: try not to pay attention to what the rapper is saying. Instead, listen
only for the manipulation of the above accents. Tune out the specific words
until you just hear a steady noise of the human voice. I’ve specifically picked
this song to illustrate my point here, because Eminem doesn’t make any sense at
all (as we’ve already established), so it does you no good anyway to listen to
what he’s saying. Yes, it’s important that he says, “I’m hard as kenard,” but
only because of the rhyme, not because of the point he’s trying to make. To
help you do this, I’ve rendered the song roughly in MIDI.
I
suggest – nay, command – you to bob your head up and down to the music while
listening to it. Your nods should correspond to the eighth notes of the 4/4
bar, so your head should be at its lowest or highest point in the nod every
time the piano plays its chord. Eminem’s rap is played by the wooden block
sound. I’ve underlined and emphasized the word-notes that receive a poetic
accent, such as all of the rhymed words, by doubling the wood block sound at
those points. I’ve only notated the 3 verses. Everytime there is an extended
period of lack of sound from the wooden block, it means the next verse is about
to start. Verse 1 in the MIDI starts at 0:02, verse 2 at 0:48, and verse 3 at
1:54. In the real song, Verse 1 starts at 0:19, verse 2 at 1:23, and verse 3 at
2:47. Hear the midi sound below. Just go to the website below and press the big orange play button:
While you’re listening, remember,
BOB YOUR HEAD, and feel all of the accents. Feel it in bar 2, where Eminem
leaves the music hanging mid-sentence by rapping, “I’m hard as Kenard…”,
completing his grammatical idea in the next bar by adding “the little boy who
shot Omar in ‘The Wire’”. (Notice how Eminem here adds a new dimension to the
textual meaning of this song by actually going and BLOWING A HUGE SPOILER ABOUT
THE MOST INTERESTING PLOTLINE OF THE GREATEST TV SHOW EVER. Seriously, if he
had just kept spitting nonsensical things it would’ve been one thing, but to go
and say who kills Omar? Man.) The little curved line under the musical notes,
from the word “I’m” in bar 2 to the word “Wire” in bar 3 indicates a
grammatical phrase. These are complete grammatical ideas, such as a sentence,
that we hear all together in our ears as one single unit. The description of
where a rapper places the start and end of their grammatical phrases in
relationship to the beginning of the bar line goes a long way towards
describing a rapper’s flow. Eminem, thus, here propels the music forward by
leaving the sentence hanging at the bar line and completing the idea in the
next bar. Keep bobbing your head so you feel it not just mentally but also
kinesthetically. Eminem continues to leave grammatical phrases hanging and then
completing them later on throughout this whole song.
Next,
feel how the poetic accents keep falling in different places throughout the
beginning of verse 1, in the first 6 bars notated. That is, they never always
fall on beat 3, or always on beat 4, or in any regular pattern. For instance,
in bar 4, the word “boy” falls off the beat during beat 4; in the next bar, bar
5, it is rhymed with “broiled”, but that falls right on beat 3, not on the
“and” of the 4th beat, like “boy” does in beat 4. A similar thing is
done when “barbed” is rhymed with “char”: they don’t fall in the same place in
the bar. This is a technically complex technique to pull off. Furthermore,
there is an average of about 4 poetic accents during the first verse. This is a
very high average of accents to pull off. Comparatively, in the so-called
Golden Age of rap, rappers like Tupac would put their rhymes (poetic accents)
only at the end of the bar. That would mean 1 poetic accent per bar, because he
rhymed largely in a couplet, ABAB form. Eminem, meanwhile, quadruples that
rate. Additionally, Eminem utilizes internal rhyming. This means that he places
poetic accents inside the grammatical phrases that we identified earlier. This
also stands in stark contrast to rap during its early days.
In
more dazzling verbal trickery, Eminem, in bar 8, fits 6 poetic accents in a
row: “I’m a problem for ya boy” are all syllables that are rhymed with the
vowel sounds of “bomb to my mom’s lawyer.” (It is important to note here that
it is not always how the word is spelled in the transcription that is the way
Eminem pronounces the word, which is the only important pronunciation when
determining whether words are rhymed together or not.”) So keep bobbing your
head, and keep feeling how those poetic accents are emphases that keep showing
up in different places in the bar. However, Eminem does also place rhymes in
the same metrical place from one bar to the next at certain points. For
instance, in the pairs of bars 8 and 9 and bars 10 and 11, respectively, the
rhymes fall in the same place – at the end of the bar. “Tom Sawyer” and “stomp
on ya” both fall on beat 4, and “fairy tales” and “ferris wheels” both fall on
beat 4 as well. It seems so far that there is very little Eminem can’t
manipulate when he is writing his raps.
In
verse 2, Eminem ups the ante. He actually drops some pretty good lines this
verse, text-wise: “Boy I’m the real McCoy, you little boys can’t evne fill
voids / Party’s over kids, kill the noise, here come the kill joys” is sick,
along with “Yeah you’re fresh than most, I’m just doper than all”, but as
mentioned before, they are more than evened out by “Get some R&R and
marinate in some marinara.” That line itself could be considered a microcosm of
the whole song: the wordplay is sick, with its heavy amount of accents, but it
just doesn’t make any sense. Of especial note should be bars 31 to 40. The
rhymes on beat 3 in all of these bars are just sick: they are “blow up the
spot”, “boy I’m a star”, “boy, I’m DeSean”, “Boy, you’re a fraud”, “blow you to
sod”, “boy you’re the plot”, “avoid it or not”, definitely “Detroit is a rock”,
and, finally, “what point it will stop.” Listen especially to this part to how
every beat 3, with all of its poetic accents, stands out.
Let’s
talk more about grammatical phrases. In verse 3, Eminem changes a lot where
grammatical phrases start and end. For instance, sometimes they fall completely
in the bar, such as at bar 44: “I’m Michael Spinks with the belt.” Other times,
they are fall completely within the bar, bar 46: “I’m sick as hell, boy, you
better run and tell someone else.” The word-notes “I’m sick as” and “Bring in”
in the next bar are just considered pick-up notes to the bars that follow them;
they just lead to the next bar, and aren’t really part of the bar itself. Sometimes
his grammatical phrases are short, such as the ones we just looked at. At other
times, they are very long, such as the phrase that starts “And to that boy…”
and ends “black and red little sweater” in bars 47 to 48. Furthermore, in that
phrase, he displaces the verbal accent of his words from lining up with the
metrical accent of bar that we saw before, with the strong and weak beats. For
instance, in the word “Excedrin”, the middle syllable, “-ce-“, gets the accent,
but musically, the syllable “drin” falls right on beat 2. Thus, Eminem has
divorced the verbal accent from the metrical accent of the bar. He does the
same thing with the word “sweater” in bar 49. This phenomenon actually reveals
a lot about how the beat and rap in general work. One reason why rappers can
rhyme such complex rhythms in their raps is that the beat remains largely
constant. It doesn’t change throughout the song; the bass kicks are on beats 1
and 3, and the snare hits are on beats 2 and 4. This shows that without the
constant strong-weak, strong-weak beat, the rap would fall into chaos because
the listener couldn’t follow the accents of the rap that are constantly
changing, which wouldn’t be balanced by the constant feel of the unchanging
beat. But again, this just shows that Eminem can do it all.
So,
if we were to describe Eminem’s flow in general, it would be as follows: Eminem
is capable of a great number of different styles of flow. He can internally
rhyme, end rhyme, and fill up bars with multiple accents. He utilizes both musical
phrases and through-composed styles of writing. Furthermore, he is adept at
manipulating where in the bar the grammatical phrases fall. In short, he can do
it all. In a very general sense, however, Eminem’s flow is denoted by 4 or so
poetic accents per bar, with rhymes coming in groups of 2 or more, and lots of
internal rhyming as well as tons of syncopation.
The
complimentary song to “Drop The Bomb On ‘Em” would be another Dre beat, “How We
Do”, featuring Game and 50 Cent from Game’s 2004 album, “The Documentary.”
Here, the entire musical tension is based around whether the poetic accent
lines up with the metrical accent or not. Throughout the first half of Game’s
first verse, the poetic accent is always off the beat and syncopated.
Throughout the second half, it is always on the beat. Then, in Game’s 2ndverse, after having set up your expectations, he then manipulates them, as all
great music-makers do – whether composers, producers, rappers, songwriters,
whoever. Because in his second verse, he switches constantly between the poetic
accent being on the beat, then off the beat, then on the beat, on the beat
again maybe, then off, then on, then off, then off, and so on. And, as more
evidence, listen to what words Dre doubletracks in the production (answer
provided at end of post.) What do they all have in common? Interesting, huh?
You can find a much more in-depth analysis of this song and a greater
explanation of what I just said in my Rap Analysis #1, found here.
Hopefully
this helps some of you enjoy the genre as much as I do. And if you’re looking
for other rappers who are as skilled as Em, my short list is Mos Def, Talib
Kweli, and Jean Grae. Check out my other posts, such as #7 – Jean Grae and #12
– Mos Def, to see what it is they do. Feel free to follow me on twitter
@ComposersCorner, and to email me about lessons on rapping and producing! The
complete transcription is provided below. Oh, and Dre doubles all of the vocals
from Game that are rhymes – that is, poetic accents.
Very interesting way to listen to hip-hop/rap
ReplyDeleteClearly that's what I call a marvelous article! Do you use this website for your personal purposes only or you actually exploit it to get profit with its help?
ReplyDeleteNo, no profit yet. Working on writing a book though! Thanks for the kind words!
DeleteRead the whole thing, awesome work. Gives a very impression about the rap music than one would assume.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting read and to me shows the genius of Eminem. He can literally create a great song that technically says nothing.
ReplyDeleteAlso...The word "bomboclat" actually has meaning. Bomboclat:
A Jamaican expression meant to convey shock or surprise
"I won $50,000 in the lotto!"
"BOMBOCLAT!"
Also it is a diss: Bomboclat is also a garbled form of Battlecat. Battlecat (Kevin Gilliam, more on wikipedia) is one of Snoop Dogg’s favorite producers.
He is behind Snoop Dogg’s diss song against Eminem called "Secrets (feat. Kokane)" from the album Malice n Wonderland (2009). In the song, Snoop Dogg comments on Eminem‘s big ears, something that hounts Eminem since his early childhood. Now the icing on the cake is that a band called „Elephant man“ has a song called „Bomboclat“ (watch on youtube).
Another diss song where Snoop Doggs refers to Eminem’s big ears is “Turtleneck And Chain” by The Lonely Island (feat. Snoop Dogg), where Snoop Dogg says, "Rabbit kicked Dogg“. It's all part of a diss. And I wonder how many of his rhymes we don't actually comprehend. I haven't studied all of this song but I'm getting a feeling there is more to it than we understand. I'm hard as Kenard, the little boy who shot Omar in The Wire.
A beautiful subliminal reference to Snoop Dogg. Eminem goes hard on this song, right the first two lines are dedicated to identify his target.
The Wire is a TV crime drama. Kenard is a young member of Michael’s crew. Michael killed Snoop in the last episode of the series. That’s right, Snoop... a fictional character called Felicia "Snoop" Pearson (read more on wiki). My info is taken from this website and is not my own. Maybe you can analyze it more: http://www.snoopeminembeef.com/2012/06/eminem-drop-bomb-on-em-diss-song.html?m=1
Also as a side note. I really enjoy reading your information. I naturally know how to listen to rap music. When I first hear a new song I don't even listen to what is said but how the rappers sounds go with the beat to create that Head bobbing associated with all of rap music
ReplyDeleteAlso reading further into that website. Some of the verses you didn't understand actually have meaning. The song isn't just non sense. I didn't understand them either till I read this:
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